Operation Rewrite

I finished my editing of Home Another Way. Of course, I procrastinated, but in the end made a few minor scene tweaks, a few overactive adjective chops, and one rather extensive scene rewrite.

I won’t give away my major change; it doesn’t affect the plot. I will say it includes the elimination of a rather unseemly “hissy fit” by my protagonist. By taking it out, I felt it gave more weight to another emotional breakdown Sarah has in the novel. And really, who wants to read through two tantrums? One’s most certainly enough.